Missing you HURTS!!

I don't miss ya...I miss the person I though you were...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MISSING YOU HURTS!!

( If even a day should go by when I don’t say "I Miss you"…may never a moment go by without you knowing that I do…)

 

When there was so much to say, and silence said it all…

And now I realize that life without you…

Is not fine at all…

My heart is disarray…

My mind is reeling with distraction…

My body feels for yours…

An irresistible attraction…

Each moment, every bit of mine…

Keep saying that…

Today isn’t really a big occasion…

And there is no particular reason to write but…

Without you, there is no music in my life…

No sunshine in my life, no joy in my soul…

Although we remain apart, it’s nice to know we are together in thoughts…

It seems you are always in my dreams…

You fill my walking hours…

Your presence and your promises…

Warm me with their magic powers…

Whenever we’re apart…

That sense of emptiness starts growing…

But when you’re close to me…

My world is filled to overflowing…

Iam lonesome without you….

As each and every moment…

Add your warm sunshine to my life…

By your charming presence once again….

Come back soon, for…Iam missing you…

Sometimes, when Iam alone…

I close my eyes and think of you…

And the thought of your love warms me inside and makes me smile…

And whenever we’ll meet….I’ll take you there…

Someday, somehow, somewhere….

I Miss you…I Miss you…I Miss you…

Oh!

And it hurts…

Missing you hurts…

 

 

Reviews

[Anshul Khandelwal]

Well said.. in a simple manner... but the depth of it makes me realizes how much it hurts to miss someone... But
it is those moments that make your love grow deeper and longer... Those fond memories of hers will never let you diverge... Keep up the good work and dun miss her so much :) I knw it hurts.

Excellent Write ..

[Vaishali..^_^]

it is so nice and beautiful..!!
it so deep..!!and it really makes realize it hurts missing someone so much....!
i love it..!

[Karl]

This is beautiful, I so much loved it

[!!..Love..!!]

When there was so much to say, and silence said it all�
And now I realize that life without you�

Great lines, Really I loved them!

[Together]

wow! This is simply awesome!

[Asha Raphael]

wow! i loved it ... good job!

[MandarinOranges]

The pain of missing someone is uncomparable to any other pain. Well, mostly. You did a great job of explaining it here though. Good job and good luck in the contest.

[Sarah]

I really enjoyed this, through your language & repetition of words such as "i miss you" you captured the loneliness and frustration at wanting someone so badly, and wishing nothing more than to be in their thoughts even when you're apart. It's a difficult thing to constantly be thinking about someone, and wondering if they think about you too. Great job capturing this with your words! ^_^

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Another beautifully penned poem, thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Brianna Brie]

Add your warm sunshine to my life�
By your charming presence once again�.
Come back soon, for�Iam missing you�
Sometimes, when Iam alone�
I close my eyes and think of you�
And the thought of your love warms me inside and makes me smile�
And whenever we'll meet�.I'll take you there�
Someday, somehow, somewhere�.

Your words are felt my friend. Great sentiment worded nicely.

[Roxy]

"And whenever we'll meet�.I'll take you there�

Someday, somehow, somewhere�."

I simply loved these lines, Beautifully written and lovely flow! :)