One day you''ll Love me..

 

 

 

 

 

 

ONE DAY U’LL LOVE ME……

 

I saw you today with your full grace…..

And it created a huge smile on my face…

Oh! You are the beat of my heart…

And I never want us to be apart…

I wish everything to change….

With every single step I take….

You are my life…my heart….

And living in every vein of mine….

 

I just tried so hard…

And told you everything without any last…..

But,

You just broke my heart so fast…..

Oh! This feeling is like no other…

I’m just broken inside….

I then gathered each and every broken piece of my heart…

Just in front of your eyes….

And for my surprise….You haven’t said a thing….

Neither spared any lie…

My heart just cried…

But I still managed to smile….

 

You turned back to your fake friends….

And they gave you a piece of advice….

Of letting me down whenever I tried to rise…

I saw you today with your full grace…

And that still created a smile on my face…

As I even love you more then myself…..

You are still a part of my life…

But I promise you…One day…

One day you’ll love me more than yourself….

 

 

 

Time folded itself…

And I’m no longer the person I used to be…

But why are you so changed now?

As now you want me……

I know how you feeling now….

As every season of rain…

Is increasing your pain…

Yes! You are still pretending….

It’s not your happy ending…..

It’s not your happy ending…..

 

And then...you remember my last words for you….

 

 

"Yet I’m leaving

But it’s not my last goodbye…

One day….I’ll be back….

Just to make you Cry…..

As I’m sure that One day you’ll love me…..

Like I once used to love you…..

One day you’ll fall for me….

Like I’ve fallen for you…..

One day you’ll need me……

Like I once needed you…..

One day you’ll miss me….

Like I once missed you…..

One day you’ll sing for me….

Like I once sang for me….

One day you’ll search for me…

Like I once searched you…..

One day you’ll pray for me…

Like I once prayed for you…..

 

One day you’ll write poetries for me…

Like I once used to write…

With its starting lines-

"I saw you today with your full grace…..

And it created a huge smile on my face…"

 

 

One day….

One day you’ll love me…

Like I once loved you…

One day you’ll love me…

But,

I won’t love you…

I won’t love you……

 

ONE DAY...YOU’LL LOVE ME….

BUT I WON’T LOVE YOU……..

 

 

Reviews

[Natasha Ashway]

Omigod, Bhavya, this is so heartfelt, so lovely. I can feel the emotion in every line, and especially the gravity of the words:

"I saw you today with your full grace�..
And it created a huge smile on my face�"

when they are repeated.

It's a sad poem, but there's the hope for triumph at the end. The promise of more tears to come, unfortunately, just not for the eyes of the beholder but the ones he beholds.

Nice one!

[Brianna Brie]

Sad indeed...many times we don't know what we had until it is gone. My love is running from our love, but I know he will never be over me. You just can't out run love.

[Bubo]

Very emotional piece, it is so sad when our love is not returned and your words have underlying strenght
that you will be loved but will not love this person again.
A broken heart often brings out the most emotional beautiful pieces.

[Hannah K]

This is amazing! I also whant to thank you for your review. I just joined today so... that was kind of you. THANKS!!

~Hannah~

[Kevin Andros]

Awsomely written my mate! A composition right out of your heart. One actually 'feels' the state of mind and heart of the poet that is done awsomely. But this thing still missed something. I cannot pinpoint my finger onto it, but I felt that something had an empty inside while going through this otherwise superb peice. But all in all, A great and superb work! Keep it up! ~KA~