When I met my Love..Again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When I met my love AGAIN….

 

I still remember the times…..

When I used to write songs without any rhymes….

I still remember those days….

When I always used to lie awake…..

Oh! That was the time when I was in LOVE…

Truly madly and deeply with her….

I don’t know why….

But I was unable to tell her…

How much I love her…

May be I was afraid from her refusal…

Or the reason may be something else…..

That entire year I tried so hard….

To tell her what’s going inside my heart…

But days passed by,

And departed both of us……away…

And we both left alone….so alone…..

And I only said to her

-"I think so….we’ll never gonna meet again"

 

Years came and years gone…

And I decided to walk along….

Someone please!!! Save me from the future…

And take me back in time….

For words they have no meaning,

Without her in my life…..

As now, Iam looking for a reason just to smile once again….

With every changing season,

This pain I can’t explain…..

 

After some years, I got a mail…..

Reading about the reunion of all old friends…

After reading the words….

A thousand memories came through my mind…

And I decided to attend it for all the lost gains…

 

And finally, that day came….

When I was searching everywhere her face…

And then her eyes met mine…..

Brought some memories of our lives…

 

She was so changed…..

Her voice was faded …

But her face was just the same…

And I found that she was no longer the person,

From whom I was once so afraid of….

But she was also not the one…Whom I once loved….

Time unfolded the relationship of ours…..

I tried a lot to chase that girl but she was lost.….

She was lost somewhere along in this world’s bitterness….

But still we managed to talk….and talk…..

And found that even Iam no longer the kind of person that I once used to have…..…

So, I won’t blame her…as the fault is all mine…

 

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And today……Whenever I saw her….

I only search for a best friend….

So…when I met my love again, I found my best friend….

I met my love again…

And found a best friend…..

And for all those who used to say that love can never ever be converted into friendship…..

They were all wrong…

As mine for her…just did…

:)

 

 

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

I like the story in this. Relationships change overtime but few of us are brave enough to accept this truth.
This is a very honest expression of those feelings.
I appreciate your sincerity.

There are some grammatical errors in this one. A quick check will fix that.
Other than that, this is a brilliant read.

[Brianna Brie]

Reminds me of that new commercial for car insurance...life comes at you fast. The story line is believable to me, because events that occur in life definitely have a way of changing people. Whether or not one becomes more self confident or a shell of who they used to be change still occurred. It feels like a sad poem to me even though everybody wins with a new best friend. Often, I wonder what if I ran into the one I once loved. Would there still be an attraction there or would I wonder what I ever saw in that person? Sure, I can see love being converted into a friendship, but time may be an important factor. Enjoyed reading your poem, and thought the flow was smooth. Perhaps, I have a lot to say that seems like it is not a review of your writing. In my defense, how we are understood by the reader, as well as, the way we effect their thinking is an indication of what kind of writer we are.

[Nithin.R.S]

bhavya...its rare act to have lovers to be friends.. its heartening to see the reuinion..to get the affection from a person u love as a best friend is indeed charming..love is never lost..its always there in heart..only time changes..the places and the settings change..its rare to have characters changed so drastically..when you found your love you found your happiness..even as a best friend you r getting that joy..

[Rion]

In times, it's less poem than just prose...but otherwise, it's good. The timing's a bit off in places, and the first few lines, there was a rhyme that wasn't used again throughout the poem, that put me off a bit. but otherwise, it's a good poem, and it makes sense...
Poems that make sense are good in my books, :D
Rion