Where did we go wrong?

many times when in our lives we found a relationship going on a wrong track but... we can only regret upon it..!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WHERE DID WE GO WRONG?

 

 

 

 

Where did we go wrong…..

Just tell me…

Where did we go wrong…..

I cherished each and every moment of ours…

When we were more than friends…

And used to talk for continuous hours…

I still remember the lanes…

Where we used to sing songs of our gains…

I still love the flavour of chocolate….

As that was once your favourite…

But,

Everything is so changed now…

Iam still walking through the same lanes….

With each broken piece of my heart, having the same pain…

No more songs of our promises….

No more empty lies of our gains…

Why these chocolates are full of sourness….

As even they knew the reason of your fakeness……

Where did we go wrong…..

Just tell me…

Where did we go wrong…..

My heart is still unwilling to believe that you’re gone….

Why did you left me alone…so alone….

These wounds they all are real….

Which even Time can’t heal….

Why you gave me such fake promises….

Promises about the unrealistic future of our lives….

Now Iam even afraid to love anyone again….

Because…..

I don’t want to walk alone on this same lane….

Having pieces of my heart into my hands….

Where did we go wrong….

Just tell me…

Where did we go wrong……

 

Once, Even I used to smile…

But now every relationship seems so unreal…

Yeah! I know the loss is all mine….

And for you there is a surprise......

See….. Iam still ALIVE………

I personally don’t want you to come back…

As you will surely laugh upon me….

Oh! See what you have done…

You made me a living LIE…

You made me a living LIE…..

These wounds won’t seem to heal…

This pain is just too real….

Where did I go wrong……

Just tell me…..

Where did I go wrong…..

Where did I go wrong……

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Reviews

[Kevin Andros]

It is a very touching poem my friend, especially when I know what exactly is going in your heart, in your mind. This poem Describes your state very clearly. You have a very special talent my freind, don't waste this. By reading this poem, my heart cries for you. I can't help it. Nor can any reader who reads your poem. Awsome compsition, keep it up! ~KA~

[Roxy]

I liked the with you started the write with where did WE go wrong and ended it with where did I go wrong.
It somehow says everything you wanna say from this write.
Very well written.

[Golden]

Very intense and dark. I liked the pic of black rose a lot.
Very symbolical

[Blue Rose]

Harsh..bitter...cold...deep..and DARK
That's what this write is all about.
I dont know about anyone else but at least it brought tears to my eyes :(

[Blackbeats]

This poem actually moved me or in fact it can move anyone who have or ever had a broken heart.
Nice write.

[Innocent]

This piece reminded me of my past relationship and made me realized where did I and where did he go wrong.
I just hope the best for you wishing the hurt to erase soon!

[Constance]

There are so many things that can go wrong, and so many ways we try to fix things, only to make ourselves feel like we are more of a failure. You brought this home, with poignancy. Thank you for sharing this well crafted write with me.

[Candle in the wind]

I can feel this on my pulse and my heart aches.Even when we know that certain relationships are not meant to last and the euphoria of the dream will soon fade yet we delude ourselves.Sometimes it is inevitable but yet so hard to accept.Just one thins my friend let go and move on

[~*The Writer In Me*~]

I felt the pain of losing someone close to you. Good job.

[forfila]

It is hard I know, to love some one and have all these great idaes and plans for the future only to see them slip between the cracks. Then it does become hard to give your heart again, I know the exact feeling, left in confussion of what went wrong, and why.

Gosh this is bringing up relavant feelings for me right now,, I much admire this poem

Nice write


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[Frances O'Neill]

Very dramatic! I like the black rose for a love gone wrong. Unresolved love has some stinging nettles attached. Nice work though.