_ _ _ _ (based on true life experience)

I was at my cousins place who lives near my house .
It was too late at night and I had to return back home .

It was calm and peaceful ,
so decided to walk back home .
She insisted to drop me but i don't know what was in my mind that I refused her.

I started THE STROLL thinking about my vacations .
I felt that SOMEONE IS FOLLOWING me ,
I turned back but din't found anyone.
I continued ......
Suddenly, I HEARD FOOTSTEPS and I was sure that those were not mine .
I paused to look back but found NOBODY.
still in suspicion, I continued ......
I looked down and caught hold at a SHADOW behind mine and trying to GRAB ME.
I was too SCARED but then I gathered courage and turned back again .
This time I found a DOG but at the other end of the street.
I closed my eyes for a moment and looked down and I saw the SAME SHADOW for a second but then it VANISHED .
Now the MOST DREADFUL thing , I heard somebody shouting
.
.
.
"WAKE UP .
ITS ALREADY QUATER PAST 7 , JUST 15 MINUTES LEFT FOR YOUR SCHOOL BUS.
AM NOT GOING TO LEAVE YOU IF YOU MISSED IT AGAIN."
that was my MOM completely frustrated.........

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This was beautiful :)
Dreams could be very powerful and that's what your story reads about!
The ending section where I found that how you were dreaming and your mom called was very interesting :)
Overall, very well penned!

But yes, I think you should edit it again, since there are few grammatical errors here :)

PS -Atlast, I found someone on this site with my name :P
:)

[Slender Smile/Husna Tay..]

Wow! That was scary but gud.
For a sec I thought sm1 were tryin' 2 kidnap.....
but when u said no one were there I thought it must hv been a ghost....
when i knew it was a dream.....i heaved a sigh of relief.
ur story got me rite into it....
keep it up.:)

[The High Poet]

Dreams are a powerful thing in ones life. Your words drew me right into your little story. I enjoyed reading this very much. Great work :)