Fairytale

Your forest green eyes caress my soul,

While your touch brings down all of my walls.

Your soft, sweet lips make me sweat,

This, how could I ever forget.

You make me laugh, sing and dance,

I feel like I am always in a trance.

Your voice makes me shiver with delight,

You are the only thing that's in my sight.

What makes this fairy tale end with a tear,

I'm not your princess,

the one you hold so dear. 

Reviews

[Raymond Federle]

Nicely done. This was an enjoyable read. :)

[Brooke Graco]

Thank you very much :D

[Pryde Foltz]

Very nice, Brooke. The bittersweet ending was just right.

[Brooke Graco]

Thank you Pryde

[Lydia Shutter]

The rhyming is great, the emotions so lacy....till the end when the bittersweetness was a bit of a twist ending. When a simple touch can make you forget to wear a mask or protect your soul, the feelings are real. When they are one sided, it is like a knife in the heart. Good write. Lydi**

[Brooke Graco]

Thank you for your review Lydia :)

[annabellee]

I really liked this a lot. First I thought this was such a sweet love poem, until the end.
Easy and good read and write :)

[Brooke Graco]

Thank you annabellee :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)