Darkness

Darkness crawls throughout my mind,

                              slithering in and out of time.

Reviews

[child of God]

Really good I enjoyed reading it

[Brooke Graco]

Thank you :)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

I liked how you equated darkness with a serpentine image of crawling and slithering. Kudos!

[Brooke Graco]

Thank you, it just sort of came to me. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

I believe all of us are made up of darkness and light. Circumstance brings out one or the other. So much said in so few words. Good work. Lydi**

[Brooke Graco]

Thanks again :)