This poem was based on a line count I had to fulfill for a project. So, because I just wanted to go to the pub, I cheekily wrote this and just about got away with it.
I haven`t read such a piece before. This could be very creative to say or a fun to write but if I think about this from my pretty cool heart with many perspectives then one perspective comes forward showing me the depth of this piece and the perspective is "Perception" ..yes, Around the world, it`s hard, now-a-days, finding honesty people cus, as we all know that this wicked world has made the world sinister and which`s what grabbing people`s honesty making `em all blind on love...but as long as the great and beautiful people are all over the world, No one can spoil this golden land. Nice poem! Very thought-invoking .. I`d look forward reading your stuffs!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Wow - many thanks for this review! The poem reflects me as a person - kinda simple but very honest a.. read moreWow - many thanks for this review! The poem reflects me as a person - kinda simple but very honest and sometimes childlike. Thank you so much for reading into it a bit more. I completely agree with you too on all points! I will start reading your pieces now. Thanks again, you've made me smile
Hah, i love how blatantly up front you are in this. There isn't a better title and i admire it's originality. Also, pub is far more important ;) lol Nice work
I haven`t read such a piece before. This could be very creative to say or a fun to write but if I think about this from my pretty cool heart with many perspectives then one perspective comes forward showing me the depth of this piece and the perspective is "Perception" ..yes, Around the world, it`s hard, now-a-days, finding honesty people cus, as we all know that this wicked world has made the world sinister and which`s what grabbing people`s honesty making `em all blind on love...but as long as the great and beautiful people are all over the world, No one can spoil this golden land. Nice poem! Very thought-invoking .. I`d look forward reading your stuffs!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Wow - many thanks for this review! The poem reflects me as a person - kinda simple but very honest a.. read moreWow - many thanks for this review! The poem reflects me as a person - kinda simple but very honest and sometimes childlike. Thank you so much for reading into it a bit more. I completely agree with you too on all points! I will start reading your pieces now. Thanks again, you've made me smile
I'm just a human version of a dog. When I'm hungry I start growling, I love playing ball in a field, I get over-excited when I meet new people, I get over-excited when I'm in a group of friends, I ge.. more..