Invisible

invisible love

“Invisible”

 

I walk for hours up a mountain,

trying to find you.

I’m so close to the top now.

I can’t wait to see your face.

I’m there.

My smile falls off my face when,

I don’t see you.

Then the sun shining lets me know you are there,

just not visible.

 

Reviews

[Alex]

Sarah are you talking about a "life expirience" in school with a certain someone we both know? I like that pic btw. It's awesome. lol.

[Sarah]

the person.... isnt there because he doesnt know that he loves her. she just wishes that he would hurry up and find out because she wants him to feel the same.... the pic ties in wiht it in my POV

[C.J.]

ok im takeing the picture out of the poem and i get it a little but i must ask were is the person he/she is looking for?