Your Smile

Your Smile

 

The way you look into my eyes,

hurts.

Your smile,

brings tears to my eyes.

The pain of your tears,

hurt me so much.

Your smile,

lets me know you love me.

 

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and to the point. Well done.

[Alex]

amazing. i get it, how two people love each other so much that they share each other's emotions. wow, that's deep.

[C.J.]

ok i read it through a few times and the smile brings pain and then it heals the pain it created? is the 1st smile of greed or lust and the second smile a caring friendfull smile?

[Amazing-g85]

Wonderful poem! Loved it!