First Love

First Love

A Poem by Sarah

First Love

This dark room makes me feel alone.

Alone, with no one to love.

I thought I would die without him.

A friend saved me.

Now he’s my love.

But I’m still dead inside from my,

first love.

© 2008 Sarah


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aww sad i feel the emotin ad i am still dead from my first love is a very tuching line good job on this write!!!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think it says how your first love will always leave it's mark on you. even if you think it's done and over with, there will always be that scar.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 9, 2008

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Sarah
Sarah

Sewell, NJ



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