I Miss You

I miss you

Everyday I wonder why.

Why you left.

If you realized how many people you hurt.

I think about you all the time.

What if you were still here?

I wouldn’t cry because of you.

I would see your face again.

I would hear your voice once more.

I miss you,

but you wont come back.

Reviews

[Sarah]

this poem was very hard for me to write. not because i didnt know what to write but because it was and still is a very hard subject to talk about.

[Alex]

very good, i understand it. even thought i've never been in love, i can still feel the pain.

[BEEGE]

Not bad.
I can actually say I feel your pain on
this subject.
Good job.

[Bubo]

The ending of love is always hard, and missing can last for months or even years............your piece
is very sad, knowing that person is unlikely to return, and the hurt it has left behind.