Your Anything

Your Anything

 

Your eyes glisten in the moonlight.

The way your hair moves around your face in the wind.

The way you say my name,

gives me butterflies,

every time.

I wish you could see that I really do,

Love you.

I wanna be the person you think about day and night.

The last person you think about before you go to sleep.

I love everything about you,

let me be your anything.

Reviews

[gousgame]

nice one.. its strange though.. i thought about unrequited love when I read this.. and somehow I thought the last line would be "Let me be anything at all'.. that would sum up the hopelessness in the feeling for me... I guess thats what u mean by 'let me be your anything' perhaps? Terrible thing that feeling is!

[Alex]

beautiful, it says so much about young love. how you don't want to be everything at first, just anything. like a first love just blooming, you don't want to seem too obsessive, but you want to be something. that word anything... it's perfect.

[BEEGE]

This was really nice.
And I like how you say "anything" rather
than "everything" like everyone else.
It was really good.

[shinybluestars03]

Very sweet poem i enjoyed it very much
Actually ive heard something like this before
from my bf it feels so good to be loved :D
Thanks for sharing it made me smile.

Best wishes

[poetforlife]

I love this just the way your wrote it. you're not asking to be his EVERYTHING, you just want to be his anything. I love that you thought of it that way. Like a new romance beginning and you can't ask for too much at first. Not to be your everything, just to be your anything. Well done! Thanks for sharing.