Footprints

“Footprints”

There’s a certain way the sand looks in the morning.

A certain way the grass gleams when it’s wet.

A way your heart feels when you’ve been hurt.

And all you can see are the footprints that were left on your heart,

by someone you once loved.

 

Reviews

[Alex]

i like it Sarah, it's beautiful and says so much, but it's simple and easy to understand. the emotion is clear and it's just... WOW!

[C.J.]

its alot of emotion and you compacted it in so little very good job thats a hard thing to do.

[BEEGE]

Not bad young one.
I like this. I like how you
were able to express a powerfull
emotion without wrtiting half a page.
Nice