On the Brink Of Defeat

On the Brink Of Defeat

A Poem by exotic beauty

When you're feeling down
And you can hear nothing over the noise and the sound
And you're starting to give in
You think you'll never win
Know that there is hope
For now, you'll have to cope
At the end of the tunnel there is light
To reach there you can't give up without a fight
When the walls are caving in
Know that if you keep fighting you'll win
When you are drowning in sinking sand
If you persevere you'll find land
You may be in a tight spot
And temporarily, you might be caught
But, you'll get out
That's what life is all about 
The journey not the destination
So let hope be your motivation
Whatever you're going through, one day it'll end
I don't know when
But, I know this won't last forever
It'll make you stronger
Life is a difficult path
Full of obstacles, thorns, and wrath
So to succeed you must be brave
For there is light in a cave
Keep going and persevere
Have no fears
You'll get through it
So don't throw a fit
This isn't a dead end
It's just begun

© 2013 exotic beauty


Author's Note

exotic beauty
This poem is dedicated to anyone who is in a tight spot and are on the brink of giving up and think it's over. I'm here to tell you it's not over yet. Keep fighting. Don't worry whatever you're going through it won't last forever.You'll be rewarded in the end if you keep pushing forward. Right now you may think the walls are caving in on you but if you have faith you'll find a way out. Don't give up.

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I guess at one time or another u are always on the brink vanilla bean a.k.a the girl with the voice lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Let's see what other obstacles we both have to jump over...

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

exotic beauty

11 Years Ago

hey whats up people

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