To write from the perspective of a character you love, in this case it is Alice, often can lead to the most interesting work that you will ever create. I like the shortness of this piece and the inverted way that it is written.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
That's an interesting perspective. The parallel to Alice was unintentional. Thank you for your kind .. read moreThat's an interesting perspective. The parallel to Alice was unintentional. Thank you for your kind review.
9 Years Ago
I tend to write from other mindsets often. Its enthralling to successfully plunk yourself into someo.. read moreI tend to write from other mindsets often. Its enthralling to successfully plunk yourself into someone else's shoes. You're most welcome.
I liked this poem. Nice flow of thoughts led to very good ending.
"and lies are the truth
if you stand
on your head "
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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9 Years Ago
Thank you!! and maybe you could read something of mine, I have a feeling you would appreciate my sty.. read moreThank you!! and maybe you could read something of mine, I have a feeling you would appreciate my style of writing also.
Your poetry has this dark humor vibe to it, which I really enjoy. That second stanza made me laugh and cringe at the same time. This really convey the backwardness that is being human.
I am Alice through the looking glass...I mix my metaphors with barbiturates. I take my mania with a glass of milk and I rarely look before crossing the street. Walk a mile in my mary janes, friend.
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