If I were a lunatic

If I were a lunatic

A Poem by Elizabeth


if I were a lunatic
the world would be orange
or purple
or inside out

down would be left
and squares would smell like tangerines

if I were Alice, I would smash the looking glass
and hide my meds under my tongue
until lights out

but I am not a lunatic
and the world is not orange
or purple
or inside out

and squares have never smelled like tangerines

© 2011 Elizabeth


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oh, but some days . . .

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emily B

11 Years Ago

these are good words to come back to, artists are always suspect, i get tired of watching folks tryi.. read more
Elizabeth

11 Years Ago

Agreed. And thanks, love xo
Emily B

11 Years Ago

when I read this again, i felt a wave of sadness that

I am not a lunatic
and the .. read more
I am learning so much. I like this. What teachers I have now.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Elizabeth

12 Years Ago

:)
the moon makes weres into wolves..

God, the genius of the third stanza... the thrill of it, the plot and the inspiration..




Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is too good to be quirky....if that makes sense

Posted 12 Years Ago


Elizabeth

12 Years Ago

It does. Thank you!
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Piquant.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is unreal, Haunting and awesome in a twisted sense of way. Really great imagery and I love the closing line.

Posted 13 Years Ago


for a non-lunatic you sure know a lot about how they think. i'm just sayin.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


I am a lunatic at times...
Very surreal and dreamy.... I love the smell of tangerines a square smelling like tangerine would be nice..
Very nice Elizabeth.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the surealist view point and the Alice imagry.Plus, I loved the unhinged creativity. If you have no frame of reference that I can compare to, and thats what makes a poet great. From what I've read of yours, you seem to be able to take your poetry anywhere and create any image. Your boundless in your work. I've really been enjoying everything!

Posted 13 Years Ago


...i am... lol

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Elizabeth
Elizabeth

Wonderland, TN



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