Party of One

To medicate or not... to allow the mania control or to behave? Welcome to my mind, today.

A coffin and a wedding march

March Hare or a Mad Hatter?
Tea party
Party of one, please

Please, please
Mother may I?

Now I lay me down to sleep
I dread what I will see

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Short write, but you made the point nicely. How much do we need to medicate? Always a struggle as far as I know. Powerful punch.

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The loneliness shouts out..twisted minds..like ships without sails in stormy seas ..tossed around...interesting and clevery constructed

[just rose.]

yeah, i totally get this, i have a mind like this too ... however, what's amazing is the ability for the mind to see itself, even if it cannot decide which to do.

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. 'let it be' ... said the beatles ... and the world let it be ... but 'you whisper words of wisdom' here ... fluid writing ... beautiful ...

[Robin]

this walks a tight wire , wondering what lays behind the looking glass

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nice poem. The patchwork of thoughts was really cool.
I love how my mind seemed to meander about.

[josh]

nice.

[LondonParis]

Very short but powerful... Awesome poem though!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

OUCH... I must say what a creative representation of loneliness... it can certainly make the future look so unappealing. Short but powerful work here.