Party of One

Party of One

A Poem by Elizabeth
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To medicate or not... to allow the mania control or to behave? Welcome to my mind, today.

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A coffin and a wedding march

March Hare or a Mad Hatter?
Tea party
Party of one, please

Please, please
Mother may I?

Now I lay me down to sleep
I dread what I will see

© 2010 Elizabeth


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A view of Alice down the rabbit hole. I have to think more on the first line. I'm noticing the powerful punch you put into your last lines/stanzas.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Elizabeth

11 Years Ago

That's my calling card, I suppose :) Thanks again for the kind words. I will return the favor tomorr.. read more
Clayton Bardwell

11 Years Ago

Until we meet again.
Cool

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great write.

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago


shockingly good. poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


the last line makes this poem, makes this poem great

Posted 13 Years Ago


You're an amazing writer; your work is so engaging and it leaves me puzzling over images and meanings for days. There seems to be this childhood, Alice like quality to your writing, and it’s deeply engaged in this nightmare like state of existence. I love your work, madness is a virtue, enough said.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice one. Leaves you with questions.

Posted 13 Years Ago


deep and simple. im digging it :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is cute really, love the closing. This is wonderful

Posted 14 Years Ago


i don't know whether to laugh hysterically or c**k my head to the side...

regardless, its an amazing piece =)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Elizabeth
Elizabeth

Wonderland, TN



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I am Alice through the looking glass...I mix my metaphors with barbiturates. I take my mania with a glass of milk and I rarely look before crossing the street. Walk a mile in my mary janes, friend. .. more..

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