The Pain Is Gone

The pain I hide

Is the pain that’s real

The pain of getting yelled at

The pain of not being sure of who you are

The pain of having everything good taken from you

The pain that life gives

Is all taken away when 

That love of you life comes

And sweeps you off your feet

The pain

Is Gone

Reviews

[Laura Ex]

i like this poem because it makes me think there is hope that all the pain will go away. i feel it lets the reader know that pain does exist, but love eases it to the point where it is nonexistent any longer. :] good job.

[Lakurie]

This is a very nice poem Betti. It felt as if i was reading something that had been based on my life. And it is so true, the pain of life fades away when love comes.

[Jason]

i guess it is somewhat true that love concers all. But i found that love is can also be the cause of alot of pain. But over all good write......

"The pain I hide
Is the pain that's real....

Is all taken away when
That love of you life comes
And sweeps you off your feet....."


Thanks