my lyrics KISSED BY A ROSE ON THE GRAVE by Eternity

MY OWN LYRICS

Every now and then I see the light from my past

you are like my broken limb just not set in a cast

I founder like a ship all alone in the foam

But the days 

of the waves 

of our passion 

is back 

in a flash

Every now and then, I see the light from my past

You are like a broken limb, just not set in a cast

I founder like a ship in the foam...all alone

But the days of the waves of our passion is back in a flash

Your kiss is like a rose on a grave

You make me want to live

But I die in a past I can't save

Now that I drown in my gloom

You leave me alone with the bloom

On the grave

Baby

Where is the light that blinds me insane?

You remain

A Shower

Of Pleasure

And Pain

But do you know

I see the glow

Of the light

That still guides

And I'm kissed

By that Rose

Just the same.

~

Reviews

[Costa Siwale]

This piece has an almost ghostly sense of sadness and longing. I like the vivid imagery, 'You are like a broken limb, just not set in a cast .... 'a kiss like a rose on a grave'
It's love and pain, passion and sorrow, recurring memories. Well written

[Dessi]

Costa Siwale, I can't take all the credit...Watch, if you can, this powerful & romantic video: https://youtu.be/z7QCvjH-sqQ?si=wIfTVnR1TsZB3i1m

[Atominizer]

Read as the human treated like you were nothing, you did not care about how you were hurt or ignored and yet, you in the current is allowing this pain, broken hurt you settle. F**k Boy Poem?

[Dessi]

Actually, I was inspired by this: https://youtu.be/z7QCvjH-sqQ?si=wIfTVnR1TsZB3i1m