Such a fool.

You shattered my heart.

Broke it in half.

 

All you do is stand there and laugh.

 

I hope you die alone.

I hope you feel alone.

I hope you go through so much pain that the only noise you can get out is a moan.

 

I'm writing this poem to tell you I'm done with you.

And all the s**t you've put me through.

 

You're a heartless man,

who says all the things you can to break me.

 

You convinced me we were meant to be,

and can't you see?

 

I'm such a fool, such a fool for falling for you.

Reviews

[Fang (Natalie)]

Your poems are amazing!

[L87]

wow it shows me that you're not afraid to be deep with your writing!

[Jonathan De Elvira]

heartbreaking...i felt this one before so yeah, i can relate...

[Thundar]

I really like this one Beth. The sincerety, the honesty and the openess is very provoking. Good write.

[Stacey]

I can relate to your words very well! I have been the hope and I have been the fool...more often the fool. It's not a pleasant place to be or feel. When this happens I often try to gain some sort of knowledge from the experience. I think if you never stumble or fall down in life you're not really living. How you pick yourself up and move forward is what builds character. I like the format of the lines. It feels as though you were feeling an emotion and then just wrote your heart out....tears to pen. Wonderful write

A very nice poem poem with a superb ending .... yes I simply love the ending . Great job .

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

So, so powerful; the repetition just adds to it. The amount of passion and anger overflows in this poem, and I absolutely love this!

[Akshat♥]

i just loved this poem of yours...
it feels so alone when you are betrayed by your bf or gf..
this poem is nicely written..
good job:)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem..I feel this way about someone at this point, but I would never be able to say this to him...I think some men deserve to hear the words we speak through poems about them because they will be able to see what is going on in our hearts as well as theirs...I think this piece was powerful. Great write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are never a fool to fall in love... fools are the ones who use love... they are then ones who will end up alone eventually... a very raw release of your feelings, nicely done.