She's me.

Porcelain skin, blue eyes everyone see’s her and their self esteem dies.

 

Mono tone voice, but oh so sweet, she makes the boys fall to their knees.

 

Great style perfect shape, these are the things that make the girls hate.

 

Flexible and strong, she knows where she belongs.

 

Independent and certain, she knows about devotion.

 

She can draw you a heart, but it’d be a perfect heart.

 

Having her way with words she says, she spends her time writing day after day.

 

Down to earth and kind, she’s what a guy has in mind.

 

 

 

She's me.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Confident, beautifully rendered, and filled with a joy unspeakable, you let us see the you others perceive... You stand on your own and do a good job of it!

[Calypso]

I like this. You should like you are comfortable with who you are.
I'm happy for you.
At first I thought this was going to be about the 'other' women when a man is unfaithful.
I guess that goes to show that you can't judge a poem but its title.

[J.e.s.s.i.c.a]

I really like this one. It's so true! Girls feel insecure around other people because they feel inferior. It's great that you are confident in who you are, and I love how this poem shows that.

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet!

[~~Mere~d~i~t--h~~]

Very honest. I really like this

[Sam]

I think that you know yourslef really well and I know a lot of people don't. It's a great skill to be able to put that into words.

[Samantha (:]

I love, love, love this. Just the way it flows through the rhymes, but it's not obnoxiously rhyming or anything. You're a great poet. (:

[A]

That's a nice piece i liked the description of all the good qualities, the confidence that is what most people need, i always agree with the saying : " if you see yourself beautiful, you'll see the world beautiful as well" , good job.