Heaven

Earth is God's model made of clay,

where his children run and play.

 

Amazing things happen day after day,

everyone is incredible in their very own way.

 

I always wonder what heaven looks like.

Will I see unexplainable colors?

Or hear a lovely melody?

 

Will I see God right before my eyes?

Or will he wait to see me for a suprise?

 

Will he answer all my questions,

or just surround me with his love?

 

There's so many questions of the place above.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Disillusioned]

I like the poetic. It feels sweet and playful, yet mindful. I personally can't relate to the thoughts, as I'd like to believe God doesn't exist, cause if he does he sure has a lot of explaining to do to me for turning his back on all the horrors of humanity and doing nothing even though he could do everything. I don't think I want someone who willingly ignores suffer when they have the means to ease it. But perhaps that's just too much opinion for one comment. Sorry. I really like the poem, though.

[morningstar]

Ah! Another person like me! :D THIS is my favorite poem of yours simply because I wonder the same things and I believe in God. Awesome poem

[Moflo]

I love the simplicity! Its such a catchy poem, and has a very sincere message. Good write.