I Was Wrong

I Was Wrong

A Poem by WritersSoul
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Got a bit bored an depressed, so i cam up with this a few days ago

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All those times I daydreamed of a 'me & him',
I was wrong.
The times I laughed when I was really just lost and confused with tears streaming down my face,
I was wrong.
The times I cried over him in bleeding heartache 'cause of some misunderstanding,
I was wrong.
Times I thought bad in me, within depression,
I was wrong.
Hard and difficult times I turned to things I didn't need when I needed comfort most...
I was wrong.
Many times I spilt my innocent blood when I was in the dark,
I was wrong.
The countless times I battled with myself,
I was wrong.
I was wrong.
I AM wrong.
Is this how I should live my life...
Day in and day out?

© 2011 WritersSoul


Author's Note

WritersSoul
Enjoy :)

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To answer your question, no. You rid your life of whatever is keeping you down, cuz they're obviously not good for your spirit, and you surround yourself with things and people that make you feel like a good person

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing poem--

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like how i can feel the feelings and emotion in this poem. It was a great write and no please dont live your life like that day in and day out:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's sad =/
Maybe you should just try to let go (:
and listen to this song, it'll make you feel wayyyy better: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZGoWtY_h4xo
and it was a great poem! (: Nice work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enjoyed and agreed with feelings and emotions conveyed..love the power of repetition as well, excellent :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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WritersSoul
WritersSoul

South Shields, bloop, United Kingdom



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I am Beth/Bethan/Terri-Beth as my friends like to call, and I'm 15, 29/04/96, and started writing when I was about 13..? And now I get depression really bad and do things I should'nt and thats why I w.. more..

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