I Was Wrong

Got a bit bored an depressed, so i cam up with this a few days ago

All those times I daydreamed of a 'me & him',
I was wrong.
The times I laughed when I was really just lost and confused with tears streaming down my face,
I was wrong.
The times I cried over him in bleeding heartache 'cause of some misunderstanding,
I was wrong.
Times I thought bad in me, within depression,
I was wrong.
Hard and difficult times I turned to things I didn't need when I needed comfort most...
I was wrong.
Many times I spilt my innocent blood when I was in the dark,
I was wrong.
The countless times I battled with myself,
I was wrong.
I was wrong.
I AM wrong.
Is this how I should live my life...
Day in and day out?

Author's Note

Enjoy :)

Reviews

[Ms.Bri]

..I loved it. I too have had times like this that's why its so easy for me to relate. Great write. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Break The Broken]

Easy to relate to, been there too many times before. but anyway i loved the poem and how it always went "i was wrong" it really made a huge impact. loved it.

[paradise]

Nice

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is well written, I could feel the dark painful emotions! Talk to someone about what you're feeling, it could help, sure wouldn't hurt!

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

I am Ronn lol well I think it's time for you to blame others. yup you heard me it's better that way and when you think about it, it's often true than not.

[joshua deathdealer]

Well written thoughts. I really enjoyed the format as well as the flow.

[Chris]

Take some time and catch your breath... really talk with parents - not hollar at, talk with... focus on calm and grow your life from that base...

[Sakib]

Wow!! Amazing!! Very powerful and expressive. I liked that interesting structure too. Great write. :)

[An owl on the moon]

Your thoughts and feelings are so powerfully confessed through the rhythm... It stunningly drives us all into that empty space of shadows we too often hide within... there deep inside our minds. Amazing...

[Nomatterwhat143]

I was, too...I can relate to this. Thank you for this poem. beautiful. ~ Meeco