Save Me From Myself

Save Me From Myself

A Poem by WritersSoul
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I said I'd stop but i couldnt keep that promise

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Great
I am no longer the innocent
I am covered in markings
The ones I inflicted on myself...
I am hurt
Everywhere
I did it again

I couldn't control myself
It spoke to me
The music
It spoke to me
I had no other choice
I was drowning in misery

I used it
And now its covered in blood
I was strugglin' where to put it
So I used my foot
It doesn't look good
I am not proud
But it's stuck on me forever

I am a music lover
It speaks to me in the deepest of concerns
I listen to its plea
I will replay and replay until I'm satisfied
I love my innocent music that drove to from what I did

Music
Music
Music
Its forever on me

Music
Music
Music
It's forever on my foot

Music is on me and in me


© 2011 WritersSoul


Author's Note

WritersSoul
I did it again by listening to 30 seconds to Mars Closer to The Edge :(

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Music is a poewerful thing, especiaslly the kind of lyrics you listen to. it's better to listen to happier things that uplift you instead of sad lyrics that depress you even more, even if you can relate, but anyway, great write! ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done!!
I really like it..
Amazing write.

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:D Nice one!! I can feel your love for music. Nicely expressed. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this has sooo much rythm and flow to it, such a pleasure to read, awesome work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

excellent writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A higly embracing piece, full of wonder and imagery, well done, good read

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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WritersSoul
WritersSoul

South Shields, bloop, United Kingdom



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I am Beth/Bethan/Terri-Beth as my friends like to call, and I'm 15, 29/04/96, and started writing when I was about 13..? And now I get depression really bad and do things I should'nt and thats why I w.. more..

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