Stay With Me

Just thought I'd make a poem

For the time being,
Don't run away.
It makes my heart ache,
For me you'd stay.
Stay until I fell asleep in your arms,
Stay when your arms are around my waist,
'Causing them damn butterflies to riot in my tummy.
Stay so I can stare into those eyes,
That make me feel calm,
Peace.
Stay so I feel safe,
Safe in your embrace.
Just three times two = six.
Six words.
I love you,
Stay with me.

Reviews

[Dreamer]

Most of the time we think that the three words( ilove you) are really hard but those six words are one of the hardest things in the world to say. It takes so much courage to bring those words out ur lips. Though those words are the only things we want to say sometimes to them. So much bravery, knowing that after we say that they can still choose to leave but then there is the possiblity that they can stay. I guess we have to got with wht is right for us and just leave the rest in Gods hands. This piece reminds me of my poem, 'have a heart babe'- the msg tht is. Very good write:)

[savine allen aka breezy]

yeah that was nice like it keep up the good writing yeah

[Daydreamer54]

Eh, i'm not sue about the last lines, the rest was sweet until then, but anyway, it was a sweet write!

[Beaner166]

I like it.Great write.

[Sweets]

This is so so so sweeet :)
This poem has a great flow!
Wonderful write!

[Tasha]

Just three times two = six.
Six words.
I love you,
Stay with me.

This was so beautiful, I loved that part. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Dove]

i like reading this poem, how did you come up with this?? its awesome

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A beautiful poem, very enjoyable,

Just three times two = six.
Six words.
I love you,
Stay with me.

Love how you did that :)