Dream

Dreams that are real last forever ... Don't they?

I am listenin' to your voice so sweet,
In the warmth of your embrace.
Lying in your arms of
Security,
Warmth,
Love...
I feel your heart close to mine,
Feel your breath move my hair.
Taste this ecstasy of your fingers..
Fingers on...
My neck,
My lips,
My chin,
My cheeck,
My fingers...
Our fingers you entwine...
You promise me the world,
And when that light is close for me to grab hold of ....
I fall outta bed with a dizziness so real I can still feel your touch,
Still hear your voice,
Still taste the ecstasy,
Still feel that warmth that vibrates along my skin...
Then it goes away like it never happened.
I hate dreams that feel like
Reality.

Reviews

[hmm]

very well written, enjoyed. can feel the emotions.

[Muse]

You are very GOOD for 15! My only advice, change the font, it hurt my eyes to read this. Maybe you just need to make it bigger, or don't to the bold.

[Tom Chan]

an exquisite piece :)