RAP'N IT UP

LOL I dnt know..alot of you liked my raps so I just made this for you! <3

Hey what it do

I like big asses like moo moo moo

You dont like me?cool

F**k you your uncle and your mom too

Boo who who boo to you and your 9ft shoe

 

I'll shove it up your moo a*s

Choke you with glass watch you s**t out grass

Kix you down and punch you with my brass-

 

Knuckle and chuckle

Go ahead get up i'll beat you with my belt buckle

 

I dont play around so f**k around and see

Rip the evil devil side out of me

Feel my rath its stronger then a cheeta-zee

 

The birds fly around but the bee stings

Once I have you on the ground your gana pray for a set of wings

I know karate ---hiiiiyyaa---chiinngg--a--linnngggss

 

Get the point

Walk the streets but dont come around my joint

Get past me and you'll get a point

 

 

BIIKAY

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of words. Rap is better spoken then on paper. Need voice and action to create life to the words. I would like to hear the words spoken. Thank you for sharing the poem. A very good poem.
Coyote

[bluntdude]

This made me lol inside. Why you ask? Several reasons, but that first line of "big a*s" hooks me in! Write on!

[Bluefire]

Very funny xD thanks for making me smile.

[G!o]

Lol...you're good i must admit...not plenty of girls can do this but you got it. This here reminded of one of Eminem's first freestyles...

[BIIKAY]

i APPRECIATE the feedback!!! :) plenty more to come!!!!

[G!o]

i am waiting....'

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! to funny. That's my two chief influences. Marine Corps chants and gansta rap

[BIIKAY]

yayy!! FUN and p.s. - thanks for serving our country. very much appreciated. xo

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Cool write, you have a killer style

[BIIKAY]

LOL!! THANK YOOOOUU -o-

[Michael Soul]

niselay say'ed you kan sense thee emotion within your words

[BIIKAY]

awww ANGERRRR lol which is sooo funny bc im just a happy recently kinda sad girl so I dont know how I write pieces that express anger..thank you tho!!

[Michael Soul]

your welcome !!