LONELY HERE ON EARTH

For my little brother.:')

I often think about you

Wondering if theres truth when they say the heavens above are filled with beautiful rays of white and blue

 

I hope your looking over me

For my head is buried in a abyuss of hurt but maybe one day I'll see

That you've been my blue eyed angel soaring all around me

 

Please gently sew my heart back together so I can feel whole again

For it is severely broken as if it went through a tornato weather wind

 

I try my best to stay strong, but I cant help to think about how your gone

My thoughts take over and for a minute I have no control

I shake it off with the power from deep down in my soul

 

I cant believe your already in the next world before me

When it is my time I need you to help me get heavens key

 

I would do anything to bring you back here on earth

I would hug and squeeze you and tell you your worth

 

For now please little brother rest in peace up there

As I try to get through my lonley days wondering how this is fair

 

 

BIIKAY-

Reviews

[Mia]

You're a beautiful writer and you just pour out your emotions in your work and it is always a privilege to get a glimpse of your heart through your writing.
"Please gently sew my heart back together so I can feel whole again" that line really touched me!

[BIIKAY]

awey- THANK YOU SWEETY!! I try my best!!

[Rhianne Ney]

I love the way it was written and how the thoughts exploded in this work
Keep writing
100/100

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

excellent poem

[green dreams]

You pasted you're heart in this piece. Really gentle but still gorgeous.

[BIIKAY]

OMG THANKS! i wrote that out of a recent experience! :)

[green dreams]

Aww! Hope you get over it, pretty soon.

[cevance]

Beautifully expressed. It was my pleasure.

[BIIKAY]

aw I appreciate that

[Sirius King]

:-(

[BIIKAY]

ughhh the pain never dies. :(

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Heartwrenching and yet oh so beautiful. I too have one in heaven that looks after me and I can't believe he went before me.
You may want to take a look at some of your words here I think you meant tornado and lonely. I send you big hugs.

[BIIKAY]

lol! i am terrible at grammer :( thanks hun!