ADDICTION IS NOT FOR YOU

Thinking about how when I was in highschool drugs were cool..til someone dies..

 

Addicition

Is a strong gravity pull between the heart and minds friction

 

It slides deep beneath your skin until you feel a win

Each time sliping farther away, wondering how it could have been 

 

You see addiction is evil

Once you start you can't control the urges of wanting the metal bevel of the needle

 

Dont start because it never stops

Its not worth the schizo-paronia trips or a visit from the cops

 

You can lose life but conquer death

All because of a substance called meth

 

So next time your faced with an addiction decision

Imagine your lifeless self laying in your hollow death bed with no vision

 

The world turns a lonely shade of dark black

Say a final fairwell because your never comming back

 

How sad that addiction took your life

Not a gun or even a  knife

 

BIIKAY-

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

very deep poem and it's right to the point which I like,good write

[Coyote Poetry]

Many kind of addictions. In the end. We will know many. Some addiction won't kill you. Can send you into the wrong direction. I like the way you explained addiction in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[BIIKAY]

your so kind with all your great words! thanks for taking time to read my work. I will be sure to do the same!

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

This is a great write. My own experience says you nailed it. Strong and very intense. Should be published for youth to see. Thanks.

[BIIKAY]

aww thank you sweetyy!!!

[Jolie Blossom]

Wow Beth, this is so good! You have so much to write about, keep it up!

[BIIKAY]

THANK YOU!! omg I was sooooo mad!!! I had a little bit of a diff version and when I went to go post it my computer said web was not responding and shut me out of it and I remebered everyting except two lines...grrr....

[Steven Cash]

lol ;)

[Steven Cash]

Great job, Beth

[Steven Cash]

Boom, right on point!

[BIIKAY]

thank you steven! I am not flattering myself but when I was done writing this I felt like it al came together really well! and straight to the point