MY SWEET BROTHER OF SERENITY

A poem for my Brother. I am so broken I cant find closure any other way but to write.

They say death is a part of life

 But I wish life was a part of death

 

So I could be with you everyday

To avoid all the pain that is eating me alive in everyway

 

How many tears can my sad eyes cry?

How am I ever suppose to pretend to get by?

 

They say replace the thought of your death with a thought of a good time

I try so hard but all I can do is clench my fists and cry, remebering your amazing shine

 

You will forever be my sweet Brother of serenity

So for now I will live my life on this earth, which will feel like a ticking clock of inifinity

Until my clock goes dead

Then reach down and grab my soul off my death bed

 

My sweet Brother of serenity

 It's me and you for infinity

 

BIIKAY-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

This is really from heart and very well executed. After reading your toxic drug which charmed me by it simplicity, this one caught me by surprise a little. Much more emotive and complex is this poem which some would say should not be a surprise given the context. However it still takes skill to deliver such heart felt emotion and this a fine poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe it is what we do between birth and death that matters. It is waste of time to be concern with death. I did like the story and thoughts in the poem.
"You will forever be my sweet Brother of serenity
So for now I will live my life on this earth, which will feel like a ticking clock of inifinity"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[BIIKAY]

I MISS MY BRO :( WASNT SUPPOSE TO BE LIKE THIS... THANK YOU!

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand. I lost two brothers to suicide in 1987 and 1988. I think of them daily still. Hard to understand death. I'm sorry for your lost.

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

this is sad i almost cryed.
doog writting

[Geraldine]

Awww, this is just so full of emotions. I can feel the sadness. Wherever he is, I'm sure he's in a better place right now. Very well-expressed.

[BIIKAY]

JOLIE--- THANKS SWEETY!! IM GLAD WE CAN SEE EACHOTHERS WORK OF ART ON HERE. LIFE TOOK US IN TWO DIFF DIRECTIONS YET I STILL FEEL LIKE WE ARE BUDS FOR LIFE. THANKS FOR ALL YOUVE DONE SWEETY, YOUVE PULLED ME THROUGH SUM DARK TIMES IN MY LIFE AND I THANK YOU FOR THAT. LOVE YOU!!!

[Jolie Blossom]

I am so sorry for this, and for everything you've had to go through. You are so tough, Beth. You're never alone though, and he's always with you. Keep this outlet to help you get through it. I don't think I can tell you that you will ever get over it, but you may come to peace and find happiness that you will see each other again, for eternity. Love you so much!!! Beautiful poem.

[BIIKAY]

@ random writings- awww...thanks for the suggestion, I will try it. I dont no. I feel lost right now. im 23. Ive never had something one day and torn from me the next. I am trying to take the peaceful route, but man some moments I am so angry, he was just a baby 19 he turns 20 this thursday,,,I am truly hurting right now.. thanks for the love.I joined this site at such a perfect time .

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Oh sweetie, I am so sorry. I know you have read my poem The Devils Dance, May I make a suggestion? I write to Jose in a journal, at first I wrote to him everyday, I don't write everyday anymore, but I have a journal dedicated to him only. I write to him about things that we would share with each other. I am not sure if this would help, but it was/is a great coping mechanism for me. It makes me feel as if we still talk even though he is no longer with me.
This is such a heartfelt piece and it brings tears to my eyes reading it. Just know that you are not alone. If you ever need a friend I am here if you want to talk. Although it is still fresh, your heart will always hold a place for him, but things will get better, and your love will never fade. Much love and ((hugs))

[BIIKAY]

@patient poet - thank you! :( hasnt been fun.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

So sorry for your recent loss