A TWINKLING EYE

this is to a close friend (older) of mine that just passed and we always teased about her wrinkles. I told her she will always be beautiful

She looks in the mirror
And what does she see?
Wrinkles oh my
Can this be me?

She looks in the mirror
And what does she see?
A twinkling eye
Ahh yes, this is me.

Yes the wrinkles will come
and the hair will go
But as long as she twinkles
she's young, you know.

BIIKAY-

Reviews

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Ha ha this is a real feel good poem! Loved it short and sweet!

[TheAdamBryant]

nice poetry

[kublakhan27]

This is beautiful...it's so melodic, with a nursery rhyme feel to it, a good thing btw :) I'm sure your friend would love this :)

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Short, yes - You got your point across. Very sweet.

[BIIKAY]

@afa thank you sweety!! I tend to write short and sweet stuff, I think that if I were to write longer poems I would drag them on in the wrong way..practice makes perfect huh! :)

[afra]

short but powerful ...well done