the scream

A Story by beth coster

a little girl who has the devils daughter in her.

The scream

In a small town called Milton Keynes there is a family.

There’s the mum Sarah, the dad Michael, and the daughter Amy. Ever since Amy was old enough to walk she started going into empty abandoned houses because she was obsessed with ghosts and demons. One dark night when Sarah was bathing Amy they both suddenly heard a scream and jumped. Sarah was about to go to the window but Amy started to cry, so of course Sarah went to her daughter instead of the mysterious scream coming from the alley behind them. then Amy started to say`` mummy come here, don’t go outside until dawn because there’s something out there lurking in the dark waiting for its pray``. Then Amy fainted. After that Amy awoke again and she frew up so Sarah put her in bed. Amy went to sleep straight away, so Sarah could clean the bath.as Sarah was cleansing the bath she heard another scream, but this was more like the one you hear when you’re in a horror movie and you are about to get murdered or eaten. Sarah remembered what Amy said but Sarah blocked it out and she crept to the window and looked outside. Sarah saw a woman on the ground with a knife through her chest. Sarah ran down the stairs and opened the front door and went to the alley. The women who had a knife through her, was gone. Then Michael came back from work and got out of his car and saw Sarah in the alley on her own. He went over to fetch her back into the house.so they both went into the house but what they didn`t realise is that Amy was sitting on the kitchen floor saying ``mummy disobeyed Lilith’s orders``. Then Amy got up from the kitchen floor and went into the living room where her mum and dad are. Amy had a carving knife with her and her dad tried to take it off her but she clicked her fingers and Michael`s head exploded. Blood splattered all over Sarah and she broke down in tears and screamed. Then Amy said you disobeyed mine and Lilith`s order`s so you shall be punished!

© 2011 beth coster

Author's Note

im only 11 so hope this is ok to you.

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Shellie

You have excellent potential, I can tell from the way you tell it. It could do with a tidy up though, especially spelling, but an excellent first story.