But still

Standing on the battle field ,

My armour dented,

My helmet tinged,

But still prepared to fight.

I charge though the withered grass, 

To my expected writhing agony.

My sword useless now,

My protection worthless,

But still continuing on.

My appearance defeated,

My poor body bruised,

Myself wounded,

But still I perceive.

Reviews

[Emily Spence]

This is really great hun! I love how it's left for the reader to have their own perspective on it; it could be about a relationship or any hard issues in life! Really descriptive but simple, well done! :) x

[bethany cullen]

Thank you so mucher potter :) X

[Potter]

Is this about being in a rocky relationship? I am assuming that. I dont comment in general unless something is well done and THIS is.

[Alana McGuire]

I love the perseverance here!! It doesn't matter how many times you get knocked down, but it's how many times you get back up that really counts. :)
You get 'em, girl!

[bethany cullen]

Thank you, and the metaphore was left for your own imagination, a messy relationship, a crazy friend ship or just a hard situation in life.
thanks :) Xx

[Laura Maidah]

Is this a metaphorical battle field? For a young author, you are very gifted! I like the verb "tinged" a lot. Thanks for a great read.

[bethany cullen]

sorry, the last word was supposed to say persevere!