Through a women's eyes.<3

Through a women's eyes.<3

A Poem by bethany cullen

Do you know why women write of romance?

 

Do know why we have our crazy rants?

 

Because we find you men enchanting!

 

We want to be a Queen and you be our king!

 

We find your smiles like sugar, voices like honey,

 

Some are charming, some are funny.

 

So describe  us as shallow and easy,

 

Because relationships to you are breazy.

 

So go ahead and criticize,

 

'Coz you'll never se love though a women's eyes..<3

 

 

 

 

© 2012 bethany cullen


Author's Note

bethany cullen
Thi is not to all men, or a form of sexicism it's to a particular boy I know who claims the male gender is supierior!

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You have nicely spoken to your boy about man's attitude to a woman.
This poem may be an eye opener for the men and certain change may be noticed
in their behavior.
You may add a "r" with though in the last line.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Because we find you men enchanting. We hope so. LOL

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is charming and sweet. I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


All of this is so true!! I'm still looking for my king, but I'm patient and he'll come when God sends him. :)
Keep up the wonderful writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hah! I suppose sometimes they are disgusting lol, but thank you :) x

Posted 12 Years Ago


"See" is missing an "e" in the last line. I live to read words this cute. "we find you men enchanting" is not always true, but it's adorable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you so much :) X

Posted 12 Years Ago


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super :)
i loved it ...it has conveyed everything you wanted to express :)
Asb

Posted 12 Years Ago



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bethany cullen
bethany cullen

glasgow, ilovegod, United Kingdom



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well i love, love , love the twilight books (like all you guys) i am on the vampire team ( i love edward !) but i don't hate jacob he is very nice looking in the films and a charator who suffers alot .. more..

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