Just one big dream ...

Just one big dream ...

A Poem by bethany cullen

 Just  One big   dream.....

 

 

You picked me up an hour late,

You had jeans on and looked a state.

You forgot how to be sweet,

You made me walk home through the snow and sleet.

 

You gave me a hug,

But looked at me like I was a common thug.

I bought dinner and I paid the bill,

You sat silent, stiff and still.

 

We walked past a little stream,

I looked at my reflection and wished the horrid date was  just a dream...

 

You picked me up at 6 o'clock

In your red chevy from round the block.

You were a real gentleman,

You helped me in and caressed my hand.

 

You had a rose, just for me,

You said I made you so free.

You bought me dinner and paid the bill,

You said I was your favourite girl!

 

You kissed me good night and said I was 'reem'

But It didn't matter because it was all.. Just one one big  dream...

© 2012 bethany cullen


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Thanks Zainul...
They already have ..now :) x

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome write.
Hope your dream comes true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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bethany cullen
bethany cullen

glasgow, ilovegod, United Kingdom



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