Why do you insist on being a murderer?

        Why do you insist on being a murderer?

  

God, You make me loose my mind,

When you hold me close, we're intertwined.

When no-ones there and faces blurr,

when something warm in my stomach starts to occur!

 

What is this feeling? I ask myself,

Is there something wrong with my health?

I don't understand it felt so right,

You gently caressing me in the night.

 

I promised myself I wouldn't fall in love,

But you an angel from the starry skies above.

I promised I wouldn't hurt my heart again,

When it ended go through such pain.

 

But without risk how do you win,

But when the fun is over you're in the bin.

Alone, dead and lifeless you Hurter,

Why do you insist on being a muderer?

 

Reviews

[lolfiary]

tnat was really good expecially at the end

[Summer'sBreeze]

i get this poem very well
you did a great job :)

[bethany cullen]

thank you x

[Marie]

You've captured men very well here. Many of them do insist on being murderers...