Faster than a gun shoot!

Faster than a gun shoot!

 

You held my near and said I do,

You told me you'd be there when I was blue.

You told me your love was pure not a plot,

But It was faster than any gun shoot.

 

You left me broken and in tears,

You confirmed all my greatest fears.

I was a pawn in your cruel game of chess,

Always in postition of second best!

 

Your  lies made me feel so sick,

Did you think my heart was made of plastic?

Well be glad I surrendered, you fought.

Because you love was faster than any gun shoot....<3

Reviews

[bethany cullen]

Yeah, it was suppost to be gun shot sorry x

[Ice Girl]

Loved it! It was really good!

[Destiny]

instead of shoot use shot it flows a lot better :)
very good comparisons

[Summer'sBreeze]

firt off i think you meant "shot"
but other than that really amazing peice of work here