Dirty Dancing in the moonlight.....

Tap, tap,tap to the sound of the second,

waiting to be called, waiting to be bekoned.

You entice my body as you summon me in,

You gesture me close so you can win.

 

But what young lady doesn't like to be a fool,

Haivng fun has to be miserable and cruel.

Because love doesn't last in the arms of the down,

Even the dark haired, eligible batchelor in town.

 

As you grip me tighter and pull me close,

when I was younger thought this to be grose.

But now in the hands off the muscled man,

Romance and snogging, I'm their greatest fan.

 

So caress my blushing cheeks and say I love you,

But you won't for it isn't true.

But for now My heart feels right,

dirty dancingin the moonlight.....<3

 

Author's Note

REVIEWS PLEASE !! X

Reviews

[.Lost Soul.]

That was great :) Good write, your very talented and romance is sorta hard for younger people, as yourself and i, but you really captured the romance in there, between the words there was emotion and passion. Again, really good write. I'm impressed :)
-Emmy

[bethany cullen]

Thank you :)

[Sujash I. Purna]

Gee! I never thought it would be so amazing to read! I should have trusted the first impression from the "paper-trust" quote!

A handsome pattern and great word choice and undoubtedly pleasant to read!

[Alana McGuire]

Oh wow! This has such wonderful descriptions and flow. You're so talented, I look forward to reading your writing. :)
I've only heard the term "snoggling" a few times, but it makes me laugh every time. hahah :D

[bethany cullen]

haahh, jessie j lol forgot about tht xx

[Sophie]

I really loved this, it was so beautifully written! And did you get the title from Domino? haha

[bethany cullen]

Shocked good or bad lol x

[Drew Peterson]

wow i was shocked in this poem.. very good writing...

[bethany cullen]

Thank you alot, I tried really hard becasue romance is hard for a 12 year old (myself) to grasp lol x thank you xxxxxx

[Summer'sBreeze]

wow i was really suprised by the title but i love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great write! ^-^