dead in the stars.

A lost husband, found dead and now the lonely wife searches for her lifeless husband in the warm glowing stars...........

gazing deeply out my window,

into the glistening rooftops of snow.

Why are you not here I yell to the star,

Then I know you watch me from afar.

 

But as my eyes colide with the stars and moon,

I know you'll be hidden well by noon.

Your far away bright and aglow,

your the shiney stars, sunshine and sweet summer blow...

 

Your the man who pecked my cheek so gently,

and left for work in you sleek silver bentely.

You'd hold my hand and wipe each tear,

everyone that seemed to appear.

 

Your burning, buttery hazel eyes.

I was the winner and you were my prize.

But nothing matters, no rings or cars,

when you lie softly dead in the stars.................

Reviews

[bethany cullen]

thanks, sorry I'm only 12 and I have a few issuses with spelling lol x thank you though, It was for my grampa , he died of cancer :( R.I.P XX

[~Dragon X]

How come this has no reviews? :'(
This was a very sweet, very sad poem. It went very smooth for me and I only noticed grammatical errors. :o
It's you're, not your, and collide, not colide.
See? Only grammatical errors! Well done. :D