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EDWARD’S DIARY OF RENESMEE’S THOUGHTS:

1/1/12 RENESMEE age 3months and 22 days old born the 10/09/11

Edward: I listened content into my beautiful baby girls thoughts, funny that in the begin a little reluctant thinking my precious Bella would die in the process. Now she’s here I don’t know how I could be so silly and unloving,  I’m supposed to be her father.   So from here on I will cherish and protect her the way I do with Bella, however now Bella’s a vampire she’s slightly per-occupied, you know writhing in pain and being trained to only hunt animals.  We haven’t let her hold Renesmee yet in fear she might.... Let instinct over take her. But she’s good when I take Resme out ( her nickname ). She doesn’t mind the smell of her crib and she has being asking so many times about her. “ Maybe in a few months” Carlisle constantly tells her. She is the mother and maybe I should consider it, I mean when I talk to her, her thoughts are safe she genially wants to see and hold and cherish her.

FIRST THOUGHT ENTRY.

Edward:

I held Renesmee’d tiny, delicate head up, although she was only three months she’d grown very fast, I could tell she had all the vampire strengths like: supernatural speed, although she couldn’t walk or crawl her minds and body grew increasingly swift. She had no teeth yet but she craved blood, we fed her human blood for the first month but animal blood now hasn’t made a difference in her growing so we are happy to continue giving her it. Yesterday I heard a strange mumbling sound, like the one she made when still in my love’s womb.

TRASLATION.

“I love you,”  I was overjoyed to hear her say that, it had been the first time since Bella had left to be “trained.” I softly smiled and told my baby girl “I love you too darling, and when you’re old enough to understand what you are I’ll teach you to run like your flying across green shady fields like your flying through the sky on a soft autumn breeze tossing your beautiful brown hair back.”

 

2^nd thought entry.

Edward:

I sat watching Rosalie play endlessly with Resme, I watched her eyes light wildly up when Rose pretended to get her and tickle her. Resme’s laughter was soft and sweet, like to humans a candy apple or a delicious red strawberry dipped in expensive melted chocolate. Then Rose gave me her and left with Emmett, Japer and Alice who was much happier now that she realised it was just a baby not a monster and it did have human similarities like blood, (it did hunger for human’s blood but not her  own of course. Resme also grew but Alice said when she’d get too the age of 16 her future was unseen (because of that wet dog Jacob imprinting on her when he was 16 ) Alice said she predicted that Jacob and Resme would stay frozen at that age.  I held Resme tight in my arms day dreaming and then something happened! Suddenly a different thought, a different vibe came off Resme like she could read my mind , not understand it ( due to the fact she was a baby) but she could read it ! She had the gift, the same as me ! I was excited and this gave me the hope that maybe the same gift as whatever Bella would have ( Carlisle was still examining her gift not quite sure what it did and she wouldn’t really talk about it, a little upset about being forbidden from Resme) Bella’s human gift was immunity to  non-physical powers vampires  possessed like Jane’s and Arrow’s Hopefully that meant when they came for my darling it would be easier to protect her , I hoped .......................

Reviews

[Summer'sBreeze]

great story

[bethany cullen]

thanks :) and soz got some mistakes but I'll try to fix them next time :/ xx

[samiashannon]

Positive - Its an amazing story and you have written it really well...
Negative - Just some punctuation mistakes but very good xxx