its been so long ...

its been so long ...

A Poem by bethany cullen

It's been so long ..

 

it's been so long since you held me that way,

since you lay so happily with me baby.

it's  been so  long since  you kissed me like that

 since you hugged  me so tight 

and i wouldn't fight.

 

it's been so long since i felt you touch,

so long since i felt this much.

it's been so long since you, i could feel

Not a dream it's truely real.

 

But why did u leave me helpless and broken

without you here ,

but i love you too much to dwell on past

'cause forever i wish it'd last ....

 

© 2012 bethany cullen


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bethany cullen
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thanks, that was really nice of you to say. Poetry is not my strongest point so i am working hard to improve on it , thank you for reviewing much appreciated

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, this is so relatable. It makes me think about the past a lot. You've summed it up so well. Very nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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bethany cullen
bethany cullen

glasgow, ilovegod, United Kingdom



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well i love, love , love the twilight books (like all you guys) i am on the vampire team ( i love edward !) but i don't hate jacob he is very nice looking in the films and a charator who suffers alot .. more..

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