Mystical

Contemplating creation through the natural world.

breaking from egg unseen

a journey begins again

impulse of creation

life's unending spark

Caterpillar moves meeting

beauty's change from within

forever cocoon is spun

 

transformation of Butterfly

always and forever

a mystical one.

Author's Note

all comment is welcome

Reviews

[Snowfrost Moth]

A poem near and dear to my heart, what with my love of nature (and more specifically my pen name, hehe). The natural processes of the world always do appear to be sheer magic, especially the ones that happen unseen, like a caterpillar spinning its cocoon and then emerging later as a butterfly or moth. I especially like the lines "lifes unending spark" and the final three lines. This is a very inspiring piece!

[LE Berry]

Thanks so much for your kind review Snowfrost Moth

[Chris Shaw]

Love this little poem. Yes, the transformation from caterpillar to butterfly is nothing short of a miracle. Nature brings us wonders. All we have to do is look. Sadly some people can't see even when their eyes are open.

Chris

[LE Berry]

Thank you for your review Christine. Even as I grow older, the magic of the natural world can still bring moments of amazement. And I agree with you, I wish everyone could experience that feeling...