Violet Moment

Of life and the beauty found within it

Cooling soft

shifting blue-red

perfection blending

scent of calm

senses filled

giving pause

joy full life

moment violet

end to begin again

Author's Note

all comment is welcomed

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

The crown lotus and the end of the visible spectrum... My sister told me everything is violet the day she moved away? It is believed violet or the crown chakra gives birth to all of the others and is pure consciousness. When I meditate clear and experience kundalini it always emanates from the crown shakra and flows downward in waves to the "snake" not vice versa of which I have been told it is supposed to do? this ramble is a long way of saying whether you intended it or not pure consciousness is my definition of life and all the beauty that you just encapsulated in so few words

[LE Berry]

You've tuned into the spiritual side of much of my work in your review of this poem. I always look for the cosmic connect that can be found in nature, the very things of earth which reverberate within us. Thank you Bad Bunny.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of the raucous calm of Romeo and Juliet's love affair...and her saying "say goodnight until it be morrow" and when he asks why she withdrew her hand, she said it was so she could give it to him again.
we end to start over, quite often in life.
new beginnings...

another gem...really like your style.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This short and punchy freeverse has such impact. Unlike a boxer punching above his weight it delivers a killer blow in such a mellow colour and a paucity of ink.

[LE Berry]

Thanks for taking the time to comment John Alexander...I enjoyed your review.