Minute Space

Of thought

floating upon currant

breath of wind

carrying what sails

within every ship

to island aloft.

mountains exist there

pristine seas blue-green

dust motes containing

mind of everything.

Author's Note

all comment is welcome

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

This reminds me of an old Calvin and Hobbs comic I love that showed Calvin standing under sea of stars shouting "I am significant!" The last frame shows Calvin quietly saying, "says the dust speck." It is funny that I came across this... much of what my mindset as of late has been of the waves of thought we create in write and life. a very existentialist write here Mr. Berry

[LE Berry]

Many thanks Bad Bunny...sometimes all we have is our life of sleep to inspire...