Raven Dreaming of the Sky It Flys Within

A poem of creative thought...

Beat of wing bringing wind to soar upon.

Black eyes send forth blue vision reflected.

Cooling clouds following in endless wake.

Upon this way creating that of forever sky.

Author's Note

all comments are welcome

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Many unique images in this offering. Not sure what it means, or whether the raven is symbolic of something greater. The feeling comes across as upbeat. Interesting piece.

[LE Berry]

Thank you for your comments. I guess the poem is much like the song lyric, 'life is but a dream,' but it's not our dream but a ravens dream of the life it lives...