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The shivering chill of the wind

Was your fingers on my spine

And

The breath from my mouth

Was the steam in the bath

And

The numbness in my fingertips

Was the cliff top before the fall

And

The drip, drip, drip of the melting

Was your heartbeat

And

The footprint on the path

Was your handprint on my soul

And

The echo of the snowfall

Was the whisper of your love

And

Coming in from the winter

Was the kiss of your lips.

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[HoorayForUnderdog]

Oh, well done! Love the beat of this one and the images. The last 2 lines really POP.