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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
hypocrite

hypocrite

A Poem by Beren

I heard what you said about me
You present the times you laughed in my face as evidence
But they are just the black and white colors of your hypocrisy

You put my belongings in front of my door
You give my neighbors the dishes you polluted.
So everyone can think I run away after ringing the doorbell

I know who you really are.

I will not give up on vulnerability, because that's how I got real knives that you couldn't get with your fake shield
From real brave enemies.

You are not brave enough to be my enemy
And not honest enough to be my friend.

Paint your imaginary world any color you want,
there no sun after the rain will make a rainbow, in your world.

© 2025 Beren


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hypocrisy hits you in your face, when you see it and it's not a pleasant feeling. you write about this here in words that paints these feelings on a canvas of experiences.
these lines are truly fab!!
"You are not brave enough to be my enemy
And not honest enough to be my friend.

Paint your imaginary world any color you want,
there no sun after the rain will make a rainbow, in your world."

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

2 Days Ago

This is actually a twin poem, I wrote a few about this topic. Glad you liked it my honest dear frien.. read more
A.H.

2 Days Ago

nice to know that, will read them..
you're most welcome, Beren.



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I LOVE your line, "You are not brave enough to be my enemy" I think this line could be such a great tool in life! Is it okay if I share your line with my 8th grade students?

Posted 15 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

15 Hours Ago

Oh my god! What an honor! Of course, thank you so much!
Good text, it has a certain sincerity to it.



Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

1 Day Ago

Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment!
hypocrisy hits you in your face, when you see it and it's not a pleasant feeling. you write about this here in words that paints these feelings on a canvas of experiences.
these lines are truly fab!!
"You are not brave enough to be my enemy
And not honest enough to be my friend.

Paint your imaginary world any color you want,
there no sun after the rain will make a rainbow, in your world."

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beren

2 Days Ago

This is actually a twin poem, I wrote a few about this topic. Glad you liked it my honest dear frien.. read more
A.H.

2 Days Ago

nice to know that, will read them..
you're most welcome, Beren.

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Added on April 5, 2025
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